I usually dig ur stories... But this is just not live up to YOUR standard. It's short, its confusing, its not engaging, I found muself scanning down instead of thoroughly reading them. Its "out of no where", there's no background to help us understand what's the char going through... Etc etc. I personally think this isn't good.

I usually dig ur stories... But this is just not live up to YOUR standard. It's short, its confusing, its not engaging, I found muself scanning down instead of thoroughly reading them. Its "out of no where", there's no background to help us understand what's the char going through... Etc etc. I personally think this isn't good.

( so sad... great and I loved the way you write. )

This is so sad and good

WHY WAS I NOT ALERTED BY THIS EARLIER?

My hotmail hates me -_-"

awww poor Naru... it was cute though. short and sweet.

I feel so sad now... your words have that kind of power...

D:

But its really good! I love how you describe the setting so well and keep me in suspense on whats really going on.

:D

OMG T.T not fair so mean oh well write more XP cnt wait

o_O Well the end was... Creppy... NARUTO HE'S GONNA RAPE YOU!

Naruto- o_O

Sasuke- Shit I've been caught!

Me- o_O

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Sad too.

I nearly cried! It's so sad! Even though I din't understand how eyes in a photo can look remorseful...

Aw, so sad ;_;

Very beautifully written, even though it was so short it went straight into my heart.