Awwwww! That's no wat to end it! Next chapter?

Little over the top, but I like it.

BAHAHAHA! Loved this! Would love a smutty sequel but really enjoyed this just on its own Jayen checking with Simon is just too friggin funny, I love it!

Oh. Oh! This was so incredibly awesome!

Not only does it have terrific Simon/Jayne banter (which I LOVE) but then it has funny and sexy Rayne conversation as well. Which is basically the best of everything!

great one shot loved it lots thanks

ohhhh yes please do a follow up I love your short little pieces so much fun. Simon has no idea what he just did does he Wicked wicked lady

Well, this definitely calls for a follow up. We have to see what unfolds as River dances for Jayne. I'd also like to see what happens when (not if) Mal/Simon discover the pole.)

You never cease to amaze me! And your writing portrays Ricer perfectly!

I loved this one shot! I loved how Jayne had to confirm that river was no more crazy than usual! Too Funny! I loved how River wanted to seduce Jayne with the pole dance she learned off the wave! Too Funny! Please bring on the M version!

Hahaha, cute! Leave it to GoB to come up with that kind of prompt. ;P Im always open for an NC17 follow up. :D

Love it, love it, love it! And while I would *never* object to an NC-17 follow-up (please, woman, who are you talkin' to?) I also think it stands just fine all on its own.

Heh heh...I love a pole dancing River. Poor, poor Jayne doesn't stand a chance, although that was right mature of him to double check that she wasn't more insane than usual LOL.

Thanks for this, love I thoroughly enjoyed it!