I love them!

How come there are only 15 drabbles ? xD

...wow. What a twist. This is a great idea, and you wrote it very well! While I think it works perfectly as a drabble, I'd love to see this idea expanded and turned into something bigger.

Nooooo/Sorry, too emotional to write a proper review right now :O

Justine

chibibotan jofthestars

These drabbles are really well written. Each one packs such a strong emotional punch despite their short length. You've managed to condense all that emotion into a neat little package in every chapter and I love your descriptions and writing style. Excellent job so far. I love that you've explored a wide variety of characters, even more minor ones like Kunsel, and I especially love all the Zack-centric drabbles. I love that you've managed to capture so many emotions surrounding his character both from himself and from what others thought of him (I also love the Zack/Cissnei undertones in some of the drabbles. I always thought those two could have had something were it not for their circumstances). And this last chapter really tugged at my heartstrings. To imagine Zack going through all that just to end up in Hojo's grasp AGAIN. God, I just feel so horrible for him. Anyway, overall excellent job with these. Keep up the awesome work!

I miss Kunsel. He was one of my favorite characters. I like how Kunsel feels that he let Zack down. Lovely story.

-squeal-oohhhh, I just love ZxA fluff!
I never knew Aerith would be so bold and made the 1st move xD

Good job with this 1, keep it up!

Awww, poor tifa...I really do feel for her
I don't know whether I should feel sympathy for Cloud or hate him xP

I loved this.

This one just too sad...

The words were just so deep...

Another chapter well-done!

Wow. Chapter 9 was really, really powerful. You wrote Cloud's desperation so well excellent choice of words. Keep it up!)

Aww Cloud...

Aww Zack
I like this

this is a powerful start and wow, you've got some determination on you. And good on ya for it too because the inklings and sparks of light you're turning out are beautiful. We're back adn forth across the timeline but everything fits and there's no confusion of where we are. You pluck a lot of emotions for short words. Wonderfully done and I look forward to more. Please let there be more.

Damn, this one made me tear up
I love the way you describe emotions when we read the words you wrote we not only read but it's like we experience them too. Great job _

Justine

chibibotan jofthestars

Wow, u sure do update fast, don't cha?

Gah, why must Zack always die?
I hope there's a happy ending for this...or not

Update soon!

I really like these. You're good at drabbles Captures emotions well and they're all very interesting to read. I'll be interested to read more of these.)