|Reviews for Son of Neptune|
| kim.lakewood 5/12/12 . chapter 1
This is good but isn't the first chapter of the REAL Son of Neptune? It's good typing. Nice job. All the spelling is correct and the sentences are, too. It's all proper grammar, too. I'm impressed. Not many people use proper grammar. Once again, nice job.
| Noodle Fanatic 3/26/12 . chapter 1
YOU COPIED THIS FROM THE BOOK!GO BACK IN YOUR CAVE AND WRITE YOUR OWN STORY!
| Sibzzy 3/8/12 . chapter 1
This is kind of the exact Son of Neptune.
| asdfjkl 1/11/12 . chapter 1
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| cheyennexx 9/20/11 . chapter 1
your gonna get sued.
| The Lone Clapper 8/7/11 . chapter 1
This is really good. BUT it isn't written by YOU. I think you should continue from what would be the second chapter and tell readers where they can read the first one. Just my opinion. )
So yeah. I really can't give you compliments or critique; quite simply because it wasn't you who wrote this... But I like your pen name. It's pretty awesome. And if you write stories as awesome-ly as you come up with pen names you'd do just fine at writing this by yourself.
And please don't take this as a flame. I hate flames and would feel HORRIBLE if you took this the wrong way. ) Advice. This is merely advice. D
| kamimimi 6/28/11 . chapter 1
is this a sneek peek of a new book coming out from Rick Riordan?
| IFoundAPickle 6/3/11 . chapter 1
Dude! Ur name is FREAKIN AWESOME! All I have is a pickle... I KNEW I should have put macheti! Oh well. Anyways! I um... bet if up keep this story up and add your own writing that it will be pretty dang good! :D
| xXxrouxXx not logged in 6/3/11 . chapter 1
Too be honest with you, I didn't like Rick's new chapter. It wasn't...I don't know what to call it. Maybe it's because it isn't in first person or because it doesn't have any...sarcastic comments or Percyish comments. I don't know why...it's just not really his best. Maybe he was off when he wrote it...
| lotlot 6/3/11 . chapter 1
1: this isn't the entire sneak peak. 2: it's fine if u want to make an S.O.N fic, but u could have just started where the S.P left off. Good luck :)!
| Xavier-X 6/3/11 . chapter 1
Dude, did you copy this from the internet?