So, glad Hoss got there and that scum bag will be hung. Now...how about a follow up story. Hey, I don't care about age difference! :D

You've written a very interesting tale - who'd thought that it would go that way.

Anna/Rosanna seems like a lovely person, and maybe she's the right one to make Ben's days brighter and warmer.

I love your last two lines. There's much in only a few words. And yes, I can see how their eyes said it all. Very well done!

Glad everything worked out. Jake got what he desvered.

Jake is really a creepy guy. He better run because the guys that are after him are not really happy and might give him a good beating before turning him over to the law. I would.

Hope they get away safely. Jake gives me the creeps MAJOR time.

Glad Hoss and Little Joe are on trail. The guy is still a nut.

Good story only...you level the newspaper man's guy name off. ;) Wellllllll

This seems to become a very different story. I wouldn't have expected ben to go himself, but rather send one of his sons - but then again the gentleman's request was quote clear.

I'm intrigued.

Glad Jake didn't find him, and this Anna did. Hope Ben survives, his sons need him.

I hope it is not that nut that is after Ben, still i say uh oh. Keep it coming.

Oh oh, this doesn't look good for Ben.

I'm glad she got to him first!

How come I get the feeling it's Anna Silvers coming, not the mad man? mmmm

The guy's a nut. Ben better survive.