Moreeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeee

great start! update soon!

This story is awersome.

I love the plot but the part were Dan was talking to the cop was kinda confusing. The story is great anyway. Please write more :)

The plot line is something that my imagination had first gone to when Marti left Cheertown after talking to her father, so I really want to find out what you think will happen next.

There are some grammar errors and certain parts of the story do not flow as nice as they should but I think those mistakes can be easily corrected.

Keep writing, we'll see how the story moves along and improves with some time and practice.

love he story please write more

This is sooooooo good! Pls keep updating! :)