| Reviews for Clan Building |
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kenobigirlliz 5/17/12 . chapter 7Hello :) Nice to see you post again in this fandom, and yes I am still reading stories. Anyways, interesting to see that the clans are trying to force Dave to see them. |
kenobigirlliz 6/28/11 . chapter 6Well let's see did I see this coming? No, to be honest I did not. But I could see this happen more likely than your last chapter. Balthazar...plastic soles...IPHONE? What? |
kenobigirlliz 6/28/11 . chapter 5Balthazar modernized? No trench coat? HE NEEDS THE TRENCH COAT! Sorry, couldn't resist. A SUV really? Come on be economical here! |
kenobigirlliz 6/19/11 . chapter 4Oh dear I think Dave would be overwhelmed with the necklace... Who's the man with the box? |
kenobigirlliz 6/15/11 . chapter 3Hot piping fresh, and glazed with chocolate! How did you know! Anyways, good chapter and interesting battle of the mind. A kid Balthazar...cute :) Anyways, this will be an interesting story. |
kenobigirlliz 6/3/11 . chapter 2Back with another story I see? So, Balthazar has his sight restored? Interesting...but I thought he hated it? And what is with the prologue, huh? I mean seriously that doesn't make any sense. I guess in time it will then? |