| Reviews for Honey |
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Zeplerfer 7/17/12 . chapter 1D'aw this story was really cute. I love the mental image of England sleeping with his arms around teddy!America. France's teasing of England was also quite amusing and in-character. The fic was generally well-written, but there are a few typos and grammatical mistakes you might want to look out for. For example: "Those photo's could be anywhere by now." - those photos (no need for an apostrophe) "destroyed it with his bear hands" - bare hands (America might have 'bear' hands for the story, but I'm afraid England's hands are simply bare) "dropping his arm from it's perch" - its perch (it's always means it is, its is possessive) The sentence that begins with "England tapped his foot impatiently," is a run-on and somewhat confusing. Also, now should be know in that sentence. Sorry to nitpick. It was a really adorable one-shot and I think it would really benefit from just a bit more polishing so people can appreciate the cuteness without being distracted by the typos. Thank you for the story! |
There Can Only Be One 7/10/11 . chapter 1Too cute; I like how you gave England the teddy bear. The key chain at the end belongs to America, right? Yeah, I think so... I really loved this story; fluff but not overly fluffy. |
darlingbuttercup 6/3/11 . chapter 1d'aww... that was too cute great job! eehehe! |
artfan 6/3/11 . chapter 1AAwww... I always wanted to kno what those photos were of anyway :) |
Death Before Darkness 6/3/11 . chapter 1Oh my god, I love it! Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. brought a smile to my face. XD |