Story 4

Great story... but you could've drawn the whole Jesse thing out a bit, like being raped and abused and then having the guy come back should be traumatizing.. and I think the last few chapters should have more thoughts and feelings from Rose like when she was told she was marrying Adrian it was all action no sadness or thoughts or anything well really good story . UPDATE SOON!

Whereve u been?

C:

Please finish this story! I love it! :)

Will you ever finish this story?

Honestly, you have potential, but you rush you're stories. Why would Rose just jump to the conclusion of Tasha and Jesse working together to get her? And if Dimitri died I'm pretty sure you should definitely explain more about that. You have to explain how Rose felt and you need to explain more about how spirit works and stuff like that. If i was rating this from 0 to 5, i would give it a two and a half. And that's being generous.

Omg you have to add on realy fast cuz this story is really good even though rose isnt as brave anymore.

P.s. i like story 1the best!xD

great chapter loved it update soon and i chose 1 and 4 for the new story

great job

story 1. most definitely

Aww Dimitri would totally pown Tasha. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Tbh...i really like the first two and would eventually like to see them both on the site. But i have to pick the second, adrian and dimitri two soul mates. Could it please be a rose/adrian story?

Hey,

i think it's good that their will be only 3 chap's left. Then i think u will find a great end :D

And i would love to read the first story, it sounds like a pretty amazing idea ;DDD

And the chap: It's really good, they're a family now, a real family. It's so lovely when Dimitri holds his daughters 3 :)

But then the bitch Tasha had to come and ruin everything!

I hope Dimka will survive :(

He has to!

Aawwww how sweet! I like number 4 Please update soon!