Aww...How sad.

this wuz good... this wuz REALLI good.... i lyk this kinda ken its different.... u realli should make this into one whole angsty stori... chapter after chapter ^^ dear me this is realli good.. do u plan on continuin?? n e who post more

~sniffle~ That was really hard to read... Omi is a hard character to do anything bad to... he's just too... sweet... I'm glad Ken got stopped.. he woulda hurt Omi more if he had continued...

~*Saiai*~

That was really interesting. Different, intense, well-written. I think I know where you're coming from, too.

Aww.. That was so sad! Poor Omi! I liked it though. Great story.

Very very interesting story!

I'm no KenOmi fan and I slipped out of the RanKen fandom some few months back except for writing on it...but this, this was beautiful. Thank you.

Aawww that was soooo sad. Poor Omi......Ken was such a prick! Wow that was a really good story. Im sure you're sick of hearing this but you're very talented at writing. That was an awesome story!

That's good. Very, very good. You managed to show Omi's feelings well, and... I just like it!
But, could you please continue this? Please?
Cause I love this kind of stories, I love depressed Omi (and yes, I know I'm sick...).
Please continue.
I'm begging you.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!