I enjoy this fic, the way they fight while decorating their feelings...I love it.

I think that the movie portrayed Hermione as perfect and this chapter nicely highlights some of the faults that Hermione did in her relationship with Ron (like the prefect badge incident)

Wow this was one of the best fanfiction i have ever read, without any hesitation.

I came back to re read this story and when reading this chapter I just started crying. Ron has been through so much and I understand why he would be insecure, all his points did make sense. It was sad when you wrote about the prefect badge, the quidditch game, and quidditch tryouts.

I'm very glad I came back to re read this story. :)

How can Hermione not remember her kiss with Krum? 2 sentences ago she just told Ron that Krum was a great kisser. Is she just dumb or is she lying?

Hermione is a huge hypocrite. She yells at Ron for being with Lavender and tells him all of this crap about waiting for love when all Ron did was act like Hermione did with Viktor. Someone expressed interest in Ron and he liked it, just like Hermione liked Krum's interest. She's being very annoying.

Also, I like how you defended Lavender. She gets unfairly pegged as a slut in fanfic for no good reason. What exactly did she do wrong? She liked a boy and she showed it, oh the horror! If Hermione was as brave as Lavender was to go after Ron, and shut her mouth for 2 seconds to stop criticizing him constantly, she would have gotten Ron and there would be no need to talk about Lavender...because it wouldn't have happened.

I did enjoy this story thoroughly. I don't know if they would put all these things behind them in one conversation (they have spent a number of years misunderstanding each other's signals) but it was well done. As for your sex scene, it was sweet and tender, which was perfect for a first time (and remember it's fiction, too).

As for the language, I saw you wrote somewhere English isn't your native language and I think you must be commended for writing in a language that may not be the one you're the most comfortable with. Actually, I noticed the language improved with each chapter (the first one had some issues with tenses not agreeing) and was great in the last chapter when you used a beta. Trust me, I've read much worse on this site, language-wise. So give yourself the pat on the back you deserved, because that was a lovely story, with a sweet plot, and a nice steamy ending.

This was such a good story. I loved the fighting and yelling and the fluff. The smut was good too lol.

this story is awsome! please, can I translate it into spanish? of course I'll say it's yours.

follow writing!

You've got nothing to worry about this chapter. It was great. The whole story was great actually! I really, really liked! :D

LOVED this! SO much that I wish you'd do a sequel to it!

It was a good story.

I like it.

I liked this story. It was nice and sweet look into there feelings as friends and lovers. Nicely done!

I really don't know how I came across this story, but it was PERFECT! I mean, the dialoges, Ron's insecurity, Hermione's forwardness, ACCURATE! As regards they making love, you must feel ashamed! It was beautiful, and romantic, and spottedly describing the way 17 year-old teenagers make love for the first time. It truly brought me to tears :) Can't wait to start reading Penalties!

Aww how did I just read this story now? I thought it was sweet and the arguments very real in previous chapters. They got it all out and all that was left was love. As for this last chapter I thought it was...brilliant! Are you kidding me? Besides the fact that your English is much better in Penalties I got around that in this story and really enjoyed it. I thought the sex scene was hot, sweet, and slightly awkward as it should be given they're two virgins. I've read RHr smut many many times and I would not say that lightly. I'm so glad I checked out your author page and found this.