 Rift1 4/6/02 . chapter 1Yeah! You put it up! Hey, you know who the woman is? It's miko-chan! She's the woman! Yeah! You da man...er...woman! Kidding aside, really great, Miko-chan...keep it up! lab ya! |
 Vivien 4/6/02 . chapter 1 nice POVlet. never thought to write one from Ukkeiya's point of view. *cackle* The last line is my favourite! But seriously, it's very...*flounders around for word* ...nice? sorry, it's near midnight *yawnz* and I can't think of anything remotely intelligent. But it IS nice. You took into account the fact that Ukkeiya is, after all, a monkey, and kept it in character by keeping the 'deep' stuff minimal. |