Hey girl! *grins* I like the whole "I will never speak in front of a mortal" line. I wanna know where this is going! And of course, since you brought them up, I want to know how Haldir and Galadriel are going to be involved in the story...(That's called showing the gun. You don't show it/bring it up unless you're going to use it.
Only thing, you still have a few spelling/grammar errors. Also there's a few places where your wording is a little awkward. If you ever want someone to proofread, don't hesitate to ask me. I'll be glad to do it for you.
Peace, Love, and Fluffy Bunnies!
Anny 5/3/02 . chapter 1
Yes i wanna read more, eventhough i didn't watch the movie LORD OF THE RINGS, i like this story!
Girl, you were supposed to let me know when you updated! _
I *really* like your reason for Morrewen's captivity. Very creative. Also good reasoning for her silence over the past thousand years.
Anyway, let me know when you update next time! I've tried to email you back a couple of times, but my Yahoo! mail has been giving me a lot of trouble lately (i.e. not letting me access my account, send mail, etc.) but I think the problem is sorted out finally. Anyway, keep up the good work girl!
Hmmmm...Mysterious, and I like it. I've always liked the idea that Legolas was married (before the war of the ring) much more than the over-used "Legolas returns home from the quest, meets Elf girl, falls in love" story. This actually bears some simliarities to parts of a story I've been writing for close to a year and a half now (Although I've only got 3 chapters posted). The story is called "When My Life Begins Anew". Very good job on this story so far. Would you be so kind as to drop me an email when you update? My address is on my profile.
Just out of sheer curiosity, what is your native language? Just wondering...
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