Cute ending ;) Liked this short little lemon...it's a nice shot in the arm this morning, lol.

NICE. Loved the sweet, lemony goodness of it all. A lovely b-day gift, indeed!

Nicely done! Just the right thing for me to read before going to bed! ;)

I have also wondered about the way boys take off their shirts! Cute.

"And then she snapped, split like an atom with her particles flying everywhere and energy exploding outward. She had to turn her head and bite into her pillow, and even then, it didn't totally muffle the sound she let out. For a beautiful, suspended moment, she floated weightless through a sea of utter bliss." Wonderful description! Aren't O's wonderful! Happy Birthday Bella!

Sweet and hot. Thank you for writing.

Hoo-boy...

I was having such a terrible day until I saw your name & "new story" in my inbox! THANK YOU for giving me a big-ass smile with the vision of Edward between MY legs! *snort* I wish! Really..I do wish.

Keep on writing sweetie..Linda xo

lmao..yeah. i thought edward was a vampire in this one for a second. but it was good ]

Happy Birthday Bella! lol! I would love to see Christmas time! lol!

Wow I really liked that. I wouldn't mind if that turned into a multi-chaptered story.

Oh! Very, very nice...;) Thank you.

loved this!

Hi! *waves*

Awww high school love and sneaking around the parents... :) I loved Edward's gift one that was sweet and meaningful and another that was just full of pleasures, perfect mix :)

I loved this so much...

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Love everything you do. Your writing just makes me happy.