i LOVE this story! please continue! THANKS -Bianca K. ;)

brilliant I was hoping someone would introduce amy and jack

People dieing over and over until the Doctor can stop it? Nice idea. That, and Amy being a Time Lady (and the Doctor's girlfriend!). Update soon please, and I'll give you a virtual fez.

Really awesome so far, I loved the dialog about between the three about "don't make a time lord angry" That made me smile a lot :)I reckon you got what Amy's response to Jack would be down to a T so that's really cool.

Dialog is good but a little description might help to set up for the rest of the story, my thoughts are that a story should be equally dialog, action, and description or it gets a bit unbalanced. Would love to see one of the three get stuck in the time loop. I would say Amy but she seems to always be a damsel in distress so maybe Jack and Amy could save the doctor. Could be interesting to see how Amy and Jack get along. :) Can't wait for the next update. :D

Cheers,

Laura

Captain Jack! AHH! I really love your stories and the dynamics between the characters. Fantastic job, mate! Keep the stories coming!

NOOOO your a harsh woman seriously... thats soo unfair please tell us who the character is being called? Please (come on im doing puppy dog eyes here)

Aww i loved it but wow Jack feeling the rath of Amy the time lady whoo.. wouldnt wanna get on the wrong side of her :P

Update soon :D

Siodhna x

is it river on the phone?

Very good! I really love Doctor/Amy relationships. My name is Melissa. And if you can make me a character, then I will be your best friend forever! I think that you are a very good writer. Oh, and if you happen to make me a character, please make her someone we care about. Someone who befriends Amy and the Doctor!

Thank you so much... in advance! :D8

This is... wow! Love it! Please update soon! :) x

Great chapter! They should deffintely get married! Maybe have child but that might be pushing it a bit...:)

Im loving this... i especially loved your other one 'The future' it was brilliant and i am glad your doing a seqeul because, they are such a cute coulple together...

could it quite possibly be, River, Rory, Jack, Martha on the phone? just to name a few?

Are you getting writers block? cant think of ideas? let me know if you need help, i'll be glad to help you :)

Please update soon :D

Siodhna x

Hey, I love all your stories and I like the plots to the DR/Amy ones too! Maybe you could have River or Rory, (Not sure iff you kiled him off or not) on the phone... You could take them to the Sombrero Galaxy, it's real, I have a huge book to prove it... well ramble over, continue the good work, BTW my name's Katie-Rebecca...