Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that everyone is okay and that Mac and Stella were able to help that family! Is there a sequel?

Amazing chapter! Very intense! I really like these people! I hope everyone will be okay!

Great chapter! Very intense! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out!

*favorite* DUDE THAT WAS INTENSE. Mac is so awesome XD *fangirl squee* Partially because it's the sexy Gary Sinise playing the character but... *cough ahem* ANYWAY... you portrayed the characters very well. And I liked the plot. Very nicely done.

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Great end. Do I want a sequel? Are you kidding me? A sequel is a must. You can't just leave Gerard running around free and not have him looking to get our favourite duo.

Love the fact that Mac helped John get a job and the family are now off the streets. It's great that they are getting on. I can see a great friendship building between them all. And I want to see them in the sequel. Please. Besides you can't leave poor Flack to worry alone now can you?

Can wait for you to post need something to read.

Sorry for late review but real life can be a pain sometimes.

Love this story! Can't wait or the sequel!

Great Chapter !
i loved it !
and i'm glad that everyone is fine
the end ... it's nice to see that they are friends

but Gerard is outside... again ! grrr

Thanks my dear for this nice little story
it was a pleasure to read
and i would love to read a sequel XD

Sequel is a must now!

amazing update and I love the way you ended this story especially for the small family and little girl named Stella, that was touching.

Really loved this story and I do hope you get to write a sequel reminds me that I should write for my "Millie Taylor" again...

Looking forward to read more from you
I'll catch up with "Sins of a Father" tonight. Gotta run now and get a few things done.)

hello !

I'm a litle surprised because it's been a (quite) long time you wrote this kind of story, with lots of action and suspense.

This first chapter is perfect ! we have our favorite couple, who seem to be closer (haha) and Don (i like him) and an amazing story !

i really appreciate the changes in time, it brings a lot to the story, with their changes in mood !

Don is particularly interesting in this story, i love his interections with Mac and Stella. Of course Mac and Stella are perfect, as usual ! i enjoy reading their intimicy, they understand each other so well !
I love the increase of the tension and suspense in this chapter, it only makes me to read more !

That's what i'm gonna do !

Thanks a lot for everything.

I take me a lot (lotà of time to read them but i always be there to read them !

EmmaDana

Amazing!

Great they are married.

It's exciting and I love Mac in peril.

I can't stop reading so only a review after the story is finished.

Sorry for that.

I like the family helping Stella and Mac.

And at last they help John and Rita.

And the little girl called Stella. Nice!

A great job as always.

Thanks and hope for more!

Wonderful! Very well written! Very nice Mac,Stella and Ryder families moments. I love it. Exciting end!Challenge for Mac and Stella. Intesting ideas for sequel...

I am glad Mac and Stella are fine, i know you would never hurt them. And Mac helping John even without Stella knowing that was great of him.

But Gerard escaping? I am almost scared at what he is about to do. Certaintly will try to come close to Mac and Stella both.
Thanks for this small story.

Have a nice Sunday

Love it! Love it! *more squeal!* Oh no, my dear! Flack already send Mac for message "Gerald escape"! I hope teams can catch before its to late. Lovely part ending.

whoa, that was one action packed ending! glad everyone was ok and loved the way mac and stella helped that family in the end, but come on you can't leave us hanging like that! this totally calls for a sequel!)

Loved it!

Im so glad the six of thema re fine, and little Stella was so sweet!

Gerard escaped? yeah more suspense, hope they catch him before its to late.

Great job as always!