|Reviews for An alternate universe! ity?|
| I AM ONSLAUGHT 7/5/12 . chapter 5
haha pretty awesome, keep it going.
| Moonphase 10/13/11 . chapter 1
So true, that bit about the sun.
For a first fic you've done well.
My only criticism (and it's constructive) would be to change how you paragraph, they're a bit all over the place at the moment which makes it hard to read.
I am atrocious about making stupid little spelling errors and with grammar rules, so I use a beta. I advise you, if possible, get a beta who will give you some advice and will double check your work.
| sheelanagig 6/14/11 . chapter 2
I adore this story, it's one of my favourites already.
I hope you update soon!