Hey, I got reccommended to you by "x parrot" who's work I love. And I am delightedby your work as well. I loved the pace of the story, the events and how they reacted! I really hope you would continue with this story but take your time. Keep up the good work!

still hoping this will be updated

Heya! love the story, sf, please continue it! Oh, and I have several ideas if you want them. just e-mail me and I will eventually get back to you with one or two of them. but i'm sure you don't really need my ideas, after all, your fics always turn out so wonderfully in the end.
P.S., if this is really the ending you end up using I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE THE REST OF THE STORY WHETHER YOU WANT TO OR NOT!

Well, I'm a few chapters late but I am so happy that you put Hakuryuu in. And yes this story would probably be rather boring if normal was the only thing that happened. Good job.

I have no idea if you'll be able to read this review, considering that it's been two years since this story had been updated... But I want to take the time to review anyway. I absolutely loved how you intertwined reality and Saiyuki-reality together. I also love your dialogue- one of the best I've seen on Anyways, I hope that your life is going good for you. Nicole

chris

this is my siter's account...will you be returning to this fic anytime soon...is goku going to die? are they all going to die at the end?...this fic is really interesting...please write more soon :

W00t! At least you're gonna keep writing! Some people just drop the story and never update again. Which makes me rather unhappy.

Anywho, I've got this guy on story alert so I'm just gonna wait it out.

And yay for having lives!

_melissa

Your muse died? That sucks... I like your muse. SHe's funny.

My muse is nocturnal and won't talk to me unless it's three in the morning and I'm stocked on Ramen and Chocolate.

_melissa

Goku angst: HARD. That coffee of yours must be soem SERIOUSLY good shit!

O don want Goku to die... WHY HE DIE?

I love Kanzeon and her one and a half sugar cubes. Funny.
_melissa

I was gonna say, Matrix much?

_melissa

Well, Gojyo's dead. And Sanzo...

S'cuse me, I have to go dye all my clothes balck and go into mourning for the next... oh... wait, tehy're back in the next chapter?

SWEET!*gets over it
I love the fighting scenes. The way you kept alternating light and darkness, the chaos of fighting and the silent serenity of death...

Wow. Just wow.

Don't tell me Nii gets away, does he? Cuz he really has to die...

_melissa

GAH!

You killed Yaone for nothing?

Wow, that rilly sucks! I kinda like her...

Oh, wait... everybody dies, don't they?

Damn angsty...*Quits bitching and goes back to reading
_melissa

The only problem (physical not moral) with killing Lirin is that she has, still, a touch of the Indestructability Of The Chibi.(Wow that was long...
_melissa

Uber- Seme?

Boo-sha!

Man, if I was a guy, I would introduce myself like that all the time... that kicks ass!

_melissa

Oh, this is so bad.
So very bad... Kanan's gonna die, right?

Oh... crap.

_melissa