WOW, I am loving this, please update it more often!

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Update !
That is all.
Chaio!
Zarsla

It's good! However one small thing, it's a little impossible that Sephy wouldn't see her father for 9 months and knowing Kamal Hadley, he would double check the truth of her words... Apart from that, I enjoyed reading it... Please update, I want to find out what happens when Callum comes out...

i love this!

please update soon ;)

please wright more its so much better than the real end

Really good i read the first one by chance and i have carried on! maybe jude could come back and blackmail sephy because her knows about callie rose! just a thought

it's more in character than i would have expected of an ending where Callum lived in regard to Kamal, but i still think it's unrealistic and Sephy would not have given in to her father so easily. She is too stubborn and would not give her baby's life no matter how much she loved Callum. it's a good idea but i also dont see why everyone is under the impression that a different ending to this book must be the survival of Callum.

Hi! I really like your story. I hope you still decide to continue it. I see its been a few months since a last update.

I really like your story, it's realistic and thoughtful- keep writing! :)

There was a moment in this chapter when you went into third person, but apart form that it was great. Love the idea of the death penalty being made illegal

Short but very sweet!

AWW! That chapter was so sweet, it was lovely :D

Yay, I love it! Please update soon! c:

Great chapter, poor Callum, glad to have his life back but confused because he doesn't know the truth. Brilliant