|Reviews for Harry Potter: The Forgotten Brother|
| Dantra 7/3/11 . chapter 10
Great Story, Please continue.
| Darkmanu 7/3/11 . chapter 10
I very much dislike any other pairing then harry/hermione but tbh I expected a twist like this when I read harry refer to Luna as his girlfriend
so i kept at it and i was proven to be right to a point :D
| Naginator 7/3/11 . chapter 10
Interesting still wish for a harry/daphne pairing but oh well and wondering who hermiones lord is still so much suspense
| mione granger2175 7/3/11 . chapter 10
I am so loving this story! I couldn't stop laughing at the jokes about Snape and his arse! Keep the chapters coming!
| Aelirenn 7/3/11 . chapter 10
I just love Hermione in this. So many people write her as bitchy and I get tired of that, but in this she's smart and funny. I'm glad they got Snape. At the moment I'm still voting for Luna if only because Harry/Luna is far less common than Harry/Hermione. Of course, depending on the way the story goes I could change my mind. Not that we get a vote or anything. lol Fun update.
| Amariexav 7/3/11 . chapter 10
the character pairing is to let people know the actual pairing of the story so if you are going to put him with someone else change the pairing listing is deceiving to readers.i feel i wasted some neurons reading 9 chapters of a story i would had NEVER read if it had harry/luna i simply don't like them together so deleting you from favorites and alerts . And before you say Scythian i do like your writing not the way you decided to tag the story as something it isn't.
| RemmyBlack 7/3/11 . chapter 10
Nice very interesting
| the.stories.live.on 7/3/11 . chapter 9
Yes! I LOVE Luna/Harry! I simply adore Luna. I love that you have them together. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Bobmin356 7/3/11 . chapter 9
Honestly this chapter was a big downer... not because you paired Harry and Luna. No you stalled the plot with filler. You could have summarized the entire chapter in a statement that simply said "The Brits can't talk to any of the other species because we still have offensive idiots in charge."
Seriously, this ground the plot line to a halt. These chapters are too small for you to do this often so I'd caution against jumping off into left field all that frequently.
| Higashiyama Sayuri's Devout 7/3/11 . chapter 9
I'm i smelling an harem here...? yes definitely a harem.
| dogsby 7/3/11 . chapter 1
I lot of Reviewers should read all of the *Synopsis* to a story carefully. It states clearly, that while the main focus will be on Harry & Hermione, their relationship may mainly be about *Adventure/Hurt/Comfort*. No where in there does it state *Romance* or *Pairing* (HP/HG). That alone should have alerted the Readers to a non pairing as lovers.
It took me awhile to learn to read those reviews and synopsis carefully, before reading a Story. I have never read a Fan Fiction pairing of Harry/Ginny and avoid them like the plague. Heck, I can barely stand a Harry/Hermione romantic story and pass by most Harry/OC couplings. So, it pays in time and frustration, to pay attention, to what you are about to read.
| jabarber69 7/3/11 . chapter 9
Hey I LIKE Harry and Luna...so bring it on...and by all means a threesome or maybe foursome or maybe...wouldnt be turned down, well at least by me...
| Call0013 7/3/11 . chapter 9
| Jarno 7/3/11 . chapter 9
Ehh, have to say this is a dissapointment. I do read Harry/Luna but I prefer Harry/Hermione by far. Luna is to eccentric for Harry who craves normality. However considering this is AU, that really doesn't count does it? Still, I'd prefer Hermione and I'd imagine I'm not the first to say this but that's what you get when you put this under Harry and Hermione as main characters.
I am confused though why you put Hermione as secondary character.
| dogsby 7/3/11 . chapter 9
I like the grown up versions of Harry, Hermione, and Luna. Hermione's rivalry with Severus is fun to read. It reminds me of Herm pulling Sev's pig tails, because they secretly (really far, far deep down respect and like each other). Their bickering is cute. They'd make a good pair. I like a slightly less spacey Luna. I could totally see her and Harry hooking up.
I can't wait to read more. I especially can't wait to get a glimpse of the all the Potters and friends. I'm also looking forward to see how your Tom is as a Leader of the Dark. Harry shooting first and asking question later is priceless. Loved, Albus being denied entry each time and Herm telling everyone about Sev's injury was priceless!