Oh, no! What's gonna happen...? Write more soon... I gotta know what happens!

That was a very cool Fanfic about Urd and her daughter Lenola_

This is a wonderful idea. You must write more, of course, but the chapters have to be longer, can't leave us hanging!

Pretty cool idea but the chapters are too short! they're so unsatisfying, or at least put up 2 chapters at a time! Other then that, it's off to a pretty interesting start... but the end of chap 2 was a bit... rushed and... wierd.

Hmm... Pretty good until you had Urd say "I am your biological mother". It would've probably been more natural if you were just to make her say "I am your mother". Other than that, its pretty decent.

Alright. I know I'm reviewing my own story but oh well. Jerry, you couldn't kick my ass even if you tried. I'll try to keep writing but I've got writters block plus my life is quite busy. I'll try, damn it!

Hey there, I ready your pretty story. now write more or I'll kick your ass.

You said you'd write more if you got four reviews, well, here's the fifth. This story sounds great so far and has alot of great potential, so please continue it.

Very cool idea! I just wished that it was a bit longer.

So far so good Please write more!

more please, I think one chapter isnt enough to think how the other chanpters or even the story will unfold, so I'd say write chapter 2, and then ask for more reviews, I thik then you should have more of a yay or nay on the whole story, but so far its seems ok, a nice twist in that Urd has a daughter, is this going to be a SI or just a 'made up' charactor?

Well I like this story so far! Nobody else seems to have reviewed it, but that's probably because they're lazy! If I review another three times, will you write the next chapter? _