 Fox the Writer 9/20/11 . chapter 1Hmm...this is a very interesting take you've got on Ty Parsec, P.A.W.07. I, too, am a fan of Ty. Out of all the Rangers we've met on the show, he seems to be the one we can fit into his shoes-er, boots. xP
Anyway, he is human because he's like us-he has his share of problems, and he can be a bit sarcastic, but he does have a good heart. I liked how you created a bit of turmoil in his character-confused about what happened to him, and how he plans to deal with it.
I thought it was a little rushed in the middle, as well. It seemed to be too fast, considering how he got the bite is a very critical moment in his life, but since this is a one-shot, I can understand the pacing.
I look forward to more Ty stories, fellow fan.) |
 Daughter of Sekhmet 6/6/11 . chapter 1Wow, this was great. We've been needing some more stories for Ty and I'm definitely glad you contributed. :D
The pacing was a bit fast, especially in the middle when you were describing Ty first getting the curse, but that's alright with it being a one shot for now (though expanding on it would be nice, seeing what exactly you change from the original episode. It would provide some more chapters, too).
I also like the physical changes you gave Ty to show the effect being a wirewolf was having on him, as well as the way you showed that Buzz was actually concerned for Ty.
I look forward to any more chapters/Ty stories you put out.) |