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| Michael The-Zorch Haney 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOh this was excellent. There were some grammar and spelling errors but overall I loved the story. Finally, Genma gets what he deserves. Actually I can see this as true about Genma. Anyway, great story and a sequel would be interesting to see. |
| Dumbledork 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseGenerally I don't like Ranma/Akane stories, but surprisingly enough I enjoyed this one. |
| velvetkit 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was very entertaining, although I wish it was a bit longer ^_^ |
| Kodachi 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseTruly excellent story! Well plotted, for being fairly serious it still held on to the Ranma comedic flow, overall very nice story. I promised I'd start mentioning this in fic reviews from now on: You have a very good grasp of the voices of the characters in question. If there were lines where you weren't on-target, I didn't notice them. Since this is one of my personal pet peeves, I'm very grateful. |
| Gundum M 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Greatly. It is going to end up in my favorites list. |
| Joules Cole 2006-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a very neat idea and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. However, the writing could use some improvement. As this is pretty old, I'm sure that if you've been practicing it's gotten better. I wish there were a bit more to the ending. That felt rushed, but it was a pretty short piece for the amount that you put into it. All in all, it was a lot of fun. |
| K.F. Galindo 2006-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt looks like Genma just learned revenge is a dish best served with side order of whoop **. |
| vamp1000 2005-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI knew Genma was a evil low-life scheming SOB, but you made him almost into the man I truly despise... Hitler! I'm not into character bashing, but in this case, I salute you by making Genma this way. |
| SSJ Guyver1 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI normally despise all Ranma & Akane stories, but this one was really well done. It wasn't based on their relationship, but on the father / son hardships. Rather, the sons hardships, and the fathers idiocy. Anyways, good job, and keep up the good work. |
| Shark8 2004-04-02 ch 1, | abuseExcellent and thoroughly enjoyable story! I had no idea that Genma was so devious, you have opened my eyes to his evil genius. Seriously, though, good work. |
| Knight's Shadow 2004-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseA very well done story. |
| skinner49 2004-03-13 ch 1, | abusevery interesting concept. i liked it. :)different but still, it was great. |
| Kinai 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI read this story a long time ago. And I thought that i reviewed it. It seem that I didnt. Well I did it now. EXCELLENT story. I can tell it louther but no more clear. Kinai. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-11-05 ch 1, | abuseI had wondered for a moment if finding the journal was also part of the training. Only Ranma and Akane are stubborn enough to take the metaphor "the clouds and the rain" and turn it into a reality! *grin* Damn good story! |
| konichiwa 2003-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseHALARIOUS! |