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Radon65
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
That was quite good! Very entertaining. I tend to get queasy about some first persons, but not this one. It was well written, and I liked the interaction between Remus and Filch. Good job.
The Buzz
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
This is wonderful! Funny and at the same time quite tragic. Especially with lines like these: "I reflected, without triumph, that life had done far worse to three of them than I ever could have done." Thanks for sharing!
Vampiress-Alexiel
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
aw heheh this is so cute! Poor Remus is afraid of cheese... :)

Thanks for writing, it was wonderful!
evil-mastermind666
2007-01-03 . chapter 1
Hehehe, cheese... that's awesome.
Aw Remmy, don't be sad; the moon isn't out to hurt you on purpose. It was that nasty Fenrir Greyback that bit you, and what a horrid piece of work he is.
Merlin's trash can
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
Excellent story. Loved the part about cheese!
Bagge
2006-03-28 . chapter 1
So that was where they got that boggart from. Filch greatest fear was well pictured - and sadly enough not very far from the life he appears to live. Lupin of course is nice to the bone, and not even his student pranks can keep Filch sour towards him. Nice take on Lupin's boggart as well. Must be a hard fate to be scared of cheese.
erosgirl
2005-02-05 . chapter 1
That's FUNNY! Oh, yes. I'm afraid of all kinds of cheese. Roquefort, cheddar...Baby gouda. FUNNY!
Imp
2004-07-23 . chapter 1
That was terribly good. Light-hearted and well characterized you know, but far from fluff. I very much enjoyed it. Cheese! That made me laugh. ^_^

IMP
Gen
2004-06-10 . chapter 1
Very good! Oh, and on the Potions Master one... Heh heh. Got confused...heh heh. The one about Fluffy was good too. Well, all of your stories about Filch are wonderful...still...really. Bear with the very confused one. *applauds* You are ff.nets very own JKR in disguise...
TTB
2004-05-20 . chapter 1
I loved this,the cheese thing was hilarious!
duj
2004-04-22 . chapter 1
Good insight into Filch. Lupin too.
Daphne23
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
It's so refreshing to see a story from Filch's PoV for once. I really like the way you've developed his character in these and the other 'Squib' stories I've read. Especially lines like this:
'She was still trembling a bit, and her little heart was beating faster than usual. I picked her up,
cradling her, crooning softly.
She was my dear one, my brave one, my Queen of all cats...'
You really convey a much more human side of Filch, and it reminds me of the way he reached in CoS to Mrs Norris being Petrified. As for this story, I love the interaction between Filch and Lupin, and this line made me laugh out loud (which doesn't happen that often with fic):
'“Oh, I fear all types of cheese, Mr. Filch...
Gengi
2003-04-28 . chapter 1
That was great! ^^
I loved how you portraied Filch through most of it. :^)
And how Lupin made his boggart funny was very good, I thinks!

CHEESE! *Chases Lupin around with a sack of Baby Bells* WAH-HAHAHA! ;^D J/k Lupin! I wouldn't do that to you! *cuddle cuddle*

Anyway!
Good work!
Evil Grinlord
2003-02-18 . chapter 1
I liked this! Its something you don't see too often.
Tinuwen
2003-01-26 . chapter 1
*grinning broadly* Hehehehe! Cheese! That's brilliant! But then...what else to expect from you than brilliant?
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