Ouch. Man is he a creep. I always thought Hal was a total creeper in the movie but bejesus that was just... * shudder*

Yay megamind!

This story is very interesting! I'm a little bummed that there isn't more. Ever think about continuing it?

*phew* That's one huge bullet dodged. (Also, ew ew ew ew ew.)

Now there's just the minor problem of "Megamind took over the city." And the "everyone thinks he killed Metro Man" problem. Not to mention his sort-of relationship with Roxanne... Yeah, plenty of plot fodder left to work with. Eagerly awaiting the next update. - Matsuri

hmm. where to go from here. it sure is interesting to see how the relationship developes now without the threat of hal. looking forward to the next update. awesome story.

I think this deserves an epilogue. Don't you think? :) Something between Megamind and Roxanne, maybe?
I know, I know, I'm asking too much... *sighs*
Great chapter, though! :D

OH thank you! I hated that Hal of all people got those powers for soo long. He was a total freaky creep. Like stalker creepy. I soo love the fan-verse. _ Can't wait to see what happens next.

Ooh ooh! More! Please! :D
I wonder if Hal is gunna do something o.o!

I know you've changed the status on this fic to finished but to me it doesn't feel finished. Because of teh changes you've made to the events, the question of what happens with Roxanne and Megamind is still hanging. It's great to head Tighten off at the pass, as it were, but this just seems like a bit of a lame ending. I did read your comments in chapter 2 which just make this bit all the more hollow. I can appreciate them but yeah... half finished comes to mind.

Anyway I did enjoy reading what you have done, regardless of the above feelings, and I hope you could put in an epilogue which would be a nice and easy and quick way of looking back to tie up those hanging threads.

Hahah, I'm so glad to see this continue! I love the conversation, interesting to see what Megs would have done if he'd seen all those red flags Hal had been sending up. The spying scene was properly creepy and exactly what Hal would do. I pretty much figured he was. Can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Ha! That was awesome! And you kinda left us hangin. Continue? Please? I'll keep begging. XD

Ha! Hal is such a creeper.
But does Megamind end up with Roxanne? Please write more! We have to know! :D
Pwese? :)

Fuck yeah man! :D that's how you do it! XD oh man, he didn't even saw it coming! XD freakingly great ending here! ;D

Hal you, you, you ...insert evil thought..., glad he actually listened to Roxanne about him, well so now what? i'm hoping he gets a chance to talk with Roxanne again or they find out Metros alive, eitherway theres plenty to go from here including him finding a new candidate to be the city's hero, great story wonder what you'll come up with next.

giggles *she looked awfully good holding his weapon. If only she'd been wearing black* he should convince her into doing that if she ever becomes he's evil queen. Now to solve the Hal problem.

"Oh, man, I should have seen it before. She's a lesbian, isn't she?"

And then I died laughing XD

I'm glad Hal doesn't have powers anymore. That's one problem out the way ;)