and so begins getting them ready for invading soul society. though having Asa take over for uryu like that when ichigo's power got out of control was interesting, even if it was a bit nasty.

Good to see an update, but I'll admit I scrolled through most of this just looking for differences from canon and didn't actually read a lot of this. For the most part the differences just felt like normal bleach with naruto and OCs thrown in. Ad libbing.

In the end, you could have skipped most of this and it would not have had a major impact upon the story.

can u give us a list of the heram.. complete list.. also will asa be with ichigo or will ichigo be with rukia.. also in the original hat'n clogs was practicly dateing mrs cat... so will he get a GF to compinsante o.0 also will they take the arancar to the serietai or however u spell.. could ichigo get a heram ... witch would be entertaining naruto trying ot kill him while ichigo's dad cries in pride lol... funny immage that one please update soon i lookforward to it!

This chapter didnt make any sense, it looks like you "forced" the whole future plot into your story

whats the harem

good story, can't wait to read more

This is really good

Another one please

You misspelled jinchuriki, I'm not normally one for caring about spelling due to how many grammar and spelling errors are on here but there are certain words that I can't stand being misspelled and this is one of them.

Piece of frigging Kishimoto loving ass garbage.

Hell no I didn't like you goddamn Canon loving asshole! Stop making him weak you sons of bitches!

Finally an update! Nice chapter.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

Nice to see this one updated again.
And it was a good update too. Asa got some spotlight over her dad this time.
Looking forward to the next one. Ja ne!

Ok, to start I would like to say that this started as one of my favorite NarutoXBleach x-overs out there. I am kinda worried about how the story is going to play out, Many times when Naruto gets a child early in a storyline the author either neglects the child or slowly pulls Naruto away from the actual storyline to focus on the child's interaction with the story or Naruto's interactions with his family. I hope you don't make that mistake. Also, the lack of any screen time from Nel, Kyuubi, or Tia is a bit off-putting since while not as centralized as Yoruichi are still his mates. And finally I know many people are uncomfortable with incest but I find it hard to truly accept a story where Naruto has a daughter that doesn't end up with him. I'm not saying you will ruin the story by not pairing Asa with Naruto but be careful if you plan on pairing Asa with anyone.

I was wonder if you OC Takeo was going to have his own fraccions?

Alos if you like you can use my OC Skullak Tuma the former first Espada and now Privaron Espada 101 and the leader of them. Also with his fraccions Aisslinger, Demoura, Ebern, and Luders.

Since the first generation of Espada were like this Skullak 1st, Nelliel 3rd, Dordoni 4th, Aaroniero 5th, Cirucci 6th, Gantebainne 7th, and Nnoitra 8th. Also later have Naruto ask Nelliel about the Espada and if any can be trusted to be allies later. Nelliel would only know four for then which are Skullak, Dordoni, Cirucci, and Gantenbainne.