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The Evincar
2006-01-26
ch 1,
abuseYou no, no matter how odd for them to be on the Axis side, it would've made a lot more sense to have Shinji be on the Japanese side and Asuka be a Nazi envoy to Japan or something, since she's have German/Japanese.
solo wing alpha
2005-02-26
ch 2,
abusethis fic is good i hope to see more
if you need help with military info im very good
when it comes to ww2
ShinRa Inc.
2004-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou do realize that both of them would be Axis soldiers right? I mean, with the German and Japanese blood... Both actually never going out of either of their own respective countries... This fic not making sense because of that...
FFAUTHOR
2004-05-28
ch 3, anon.
abuseWow, damit wie Shinji ich vorstellen mir würde, ist ein Weltkrieg zwei steuert. Ich hoffe, daß Sie mehr sein großes machen können.

Translation: Wow, so thats how Shinji I would imagine be a World War 2 pilot. I hope you can make more it's great.
do u really have to put a n...
2003-10-23
ch 3, anon.
abusei really like this and i hope that u continue it
KnighteWolfe
2003-08-27
ch 3,
abuseQuick point of accuracy: During WWII, the P-51D Mustang was armed with either four or six, wing mounted .50 cal machine guns as were many of the fighters used by the Army Air Force and Navy. I do believe that the 12.7 mm machine gun was used either by the Germans in the FW-190, Me-109 or by the Japanese in the Mitsubishi Zero fighter.

Keep up the awesome work.

Knightewolfe
Remco
2003-05-15
ch 3,
abuseThis is a real good story. I beleve the characters act like thy would act if thy were in this situation.
Seythia
2002-09-23
ch 1,
abuseNich schlecht...muss ich scho sagen... ich wünschte ich könnte so gut English... abba du bist ja auch alt genug um so gut Englisch zu sprechen -_-'''
Abba mach weiter so!
Itadakimasu ^^!
2002-07-31
ch 3, anon.
abuseyou know what? i love this story so much that if you don't continue soon...as i see that you have not...i will personally come and umm...i'm all out of threats! jeez...i can't think up of any...but really...i love this story a LOT! it is really really original you know? there aren't a lot of fics in eva that are in an AU universe you know? and that's why i like this story so much!
and plus i also think that the war setting is really cool -__-;;
lieutenant shinji? XD and i hope asuka is gonna be really good in that lil plane of hers cuz she's one of my favorite characters in eva! seriously...you have to update!
and also, asuka's guardian is really cool! hehe
hmm hmm, i liked the introduction for the first chapter espescially about the part where asuka is kind of staring at shinji cuz of the war scar ::sniff sniff:: ::poor shinji:: cuz that was totally like her! you know?
ok, my extra long daily triple review has been finished, and i have one more thing to say, and i guess you've probably memorized this...UPDATE!! XD
jyane!
itadakimasu ^^! *skips off and sings la la songs*
liza w
Seif412
2002-06-26
ch 3,
abuseSorry for the late review of this chapter. I have been on vacation for a while and just recently got back. Anyhow, I preferr longer chapters, but you should write however long you want to. I like this chapter and you did good work with the depressed Shinji part. Sometimes it is a little hard to distinguish between dialogue and thoughts and the conversations in the head are a little...weird. Otherwise nice chapter. I need more airplanes...please have this "mission" in the next chapter
rei langley katsuragi
2002-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it!!!! It was brillant!!! At the beginning I didn`t even thought it would end like that!!! Please, write more about it!!!
KnighteWolfe
2002-06-13
ch 2,
abuseI like it and can't wait for the next part. The only thing I would change is that the U.S.A.F. wasn't called that during World War II, the air force was called the United States Army Air Corps (U.S.A.A.C.). I do hope you continue with this story.

Keep up the great work.

Knightewolfe
Harvey Bautista
2002-06-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseNeat fic, but seriously, it ain't right. I mean the story kicks **, the thing is the characters don't match...

Hmmm...a tall non-lean CAUCASIAN Ikari Shinji I don't see. Okay...in no other language do 'wrath' and 'believe'(neat name btw)appear like that aight? The Asuka thing, dunno she has 'Langley' in her name.

The WWII story rocks, yet the characters don't friggin MATCH! This isn't like other AU fics cause there they still retain their personas.

One more thing, hehe P-38s WUP-**! Screw the Mustang, the Lightning was around far earlier and to be honest I'd trust something with dual engines more(hey, if one goes, hopefully my wingmen can keep em off me enough for me to limp on home).

It's good work, it's just...dammit...caucasian Shinji I don't see! The naive Asuka I do(no combat experience...plus she's too nice, OOC alert), story would've kicked ** if Shinji was a JAPANESE navy pilot who transferred to Luftwaffe before '39 and Asuka was a test pilot. Hmm...the Mitsubishi A6 'Reisen' ZERO fighter over the English Channel...
fugly duckling
2002-06-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseWow! Really intersting FF i enjoyed it very much!
I'm a big Fan of WW2 stories and such.Please continue writing!
RagnarokZ
2002-06-09
ch 2,
abuseThis is the most original fanfic i have readden in weeks.It should be continued...
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