Great story you wrote there: it highlighted so much the girl s friendship & i usually prefer the seasons with MRS. G on it (i m not such a big fun on Beverly Ann) but you managed to keep it entertaining enough so well done!

I liked it. Good story

That's a pretty good start. It's really easy to use "quotes" on the conversation bits and then just throw in a 'Jo said' and a 'Blair asked' here and there. Right now it's in script form which is a good way to get a story started. Some typos here and there but overall, a nice story about friendship. I can't wait to read more and see what kind of antics you get the girls into! Cheers!