Seems interesting. Update please?

Aww...I like it. Just saw the movie. Interesting. I like your story. I'd love it if you updatd. :)

I very like this story, Marionettes, as I like LTROI fan fiction. And, despite of it isn't your main direction, I'd lovely read more of this story:)

Hi, Marionettes !

I very like your story. It's a pity that too short.

Why don't you dub it here? ;)

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Brief but has potential to be really good if you expand the chapters more and flesh out the story. In general a good start.