im totally in love with this story :)
if my life became transformers centric, i would definitely want something similar to this to happen to me, but replace ratchet as my lover with Optimus, and change the paint job
plz update soon!

i think i know what she's talking about with Starscream switching sides. It was in Armada, the first part of the Unicron Trilogy. He did become an Autobot, ut it only lasted afes epsiodes, then he switched back. He was kind of a good guy at the end of that show, but then he died. :(
He came back to life in the sequel to the show (Energon), but he had no memory of his previous life, sadly.
So... I dont think Starscream has ever REALLY switched sides. At least, not in any of the TV shows. Too bad. :(

Man... Amelia and I are pretty similar. I also want to become a teacher, or a writer, or both. We have some of the same beliefs even, except I'm agnostic. We even have the same fave subjects in school. :)
My life, though, is much nicer than hers; I feel really bad for her. :(
I like her and GOSH I wish something like this would happen to me. Of course I would pursue Optimus instead of Ratchet.
Hee hee hee hee hee (ominous giggle XD)
love your story

awww X3
ive only read a couple of stories where TFP Ratchet was a sweetheart
I prefer stories where he is, but there arent many, sadly. :(
probably because people are more entertained by a pissy Ratchet
then again there might be plenty of stories where Ratchet is a sweetspark, but I prefer the ones centered around Optimus, who will ALWAYS be my favorite cybertronian.
liking this story so far :)

Hey! It's been awhile, Crystal! I got an account on Fanfiction so you won't have to worry about me posting as a stranger.

Well, this is a pleasant surprise. I get back from Youth Group and find that you've finished your update. :D

I am glad my suggestion worked out, and I will be here to keep your perfectionist side in check if it becomes a problem again. Welcome back to the land of updates. :)

I am not really familiar with any of the characters of Rescue Bots, so yeah, I will just say that I am glad you got a lot of writing done and you got this chapter finished. :)

See you soon.

And it seems FanFiction is having issues with reviewing, so I am reviewing like this.

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:D Yay

:D

Even though I haven't watched Rescue Bots in a while for reasons, (School, fanfiction, baseball practice, etc.), it feels good to see a story with them. And this chapter was totally awesome! Oh and hope ya recognize me Crys.

Good update! I like it!

Awesome story! Hope to see an update soon... you got a great plot going on here. I absolutely love how you have Shadebreaker being related to a Prime. And I love what you've done with Megatronus... seperating him from the Fallen is just pure genius!

I LOVE this story! Primus! It's fragging awesome! I've spent the last 9 hours glued to my computer screen reading this story... it's just fragging awesome. Please, continue writing more of it. I can't wait to read more.

It's a really good story! Please update soon.

Yay! I'm happy that your sister is talking again! :)
Family is DEFINITELY mote important than fanfiction so you have every right to take a break to solve things
I look forward to your next chapter! :)