Haha I actually laughed out loud, this was adorable :)

Lol
Poor Maximus :(

love how you used maximus's point of view. Can i have my apple now? *snatches imaginary apple* anyway im def faving this and adding it to my tangled community

Hahahaha! That's exactly what he would have done! Good thinking!

This is so cute. :)

Shidonii (My shortest review ever. o.O)

This is pure genius! :')

I must say, I enjoyed Maxi's inner turmoil. I couldn't help but laugh at his argument inside of his conscience. It seemed like something he would really do. :)

EugeneLoverRapunzel

Awwww, poor Maximus! Cute! Very original too, which is always a bonus nowadays...I didn't give much thought to it, but the more I think about it the more I wonder what he really did...I think your analysis is pretty accurate though :) Anyways, loved it :D

Very cute! I liked this a lot. I've actually wondered what exactly he does with the apples. Cause when you see max again, you see the apple cores, but no bag. (or is the bag there?) not sure. Anyway, well done!

my thougts of what maximus was thinking:

"...oh who cares."

lol funny storry though.

Guard: WE MUST HANG MAXIMUS! Flynn you are free to go

Max: ...O_o?