more more more more more more!

sorry I'm weird. I like it
AND THERES A BLOODY TROMBONE ON THE FLOOR.

One note tho. I do NOT like the image of draco with long hair and with a goatee. Just a note. .

Haha, the way that you've crafted this version of Draco Malfoy is simply hilarious; his inner thoughts are great! I also love the way that Hermione is so caring; it's very in-character for her. I do love how in denial she was, and I look forward to how she reacts to the news that he really is Draco! Great job!

Lol"Sure, he was getting more and more forgetful these days, but… how did he misplace a road? Yeah. that's a good point. This chapter was incredibly amusing; I love the way Draco's mind works. This chapter was very useful in terms of advancing the plot; great job!

Haha, why wouldn't she take him to a hospital? I love how she freaks out and has to remind herself to calm down because she's a witch and can fix it. This is a great story thus far, and I can't wait to read more.

dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnn now she knows...i wonder what's gonna happen next...teehee maybe taking mine and Ryan's three things for the next chapter would not be a good idea *insert reverse brain washing here*...now that i think about it maybe not exactly next chapter but at least eventually *evil winky smiley face*

Cute! Can't wait to read more!

This should be fun;D Keep updating

Liking it so far *_(when I saw it was AU I was preparing for a totally different universe of your own making, but this seems pretty canon so far to me just divergent from the original plot line) Can't wait to see what happens next!

no nami roads don't just get up and walk away, anyway great job can't wait to find out what happens when Hermione figures out that it's Draco

This is...interesting. It seems decent. Keep updating

This is all very interesting I can't wait to read the rest.

I am not exactly a Hermione/Draco shipper but you asked me to review, so here I am.

First of all, very nicely done. The details are not lacking and flow smoothly, and the pace is great... not too fast, but not too slow, either. I suggest trying not to use the same words too much. Repetitiveness tends to make the sentences blur if you are not careful.

Also, it was quite funny. Clutching a losing lottery ticket? Ha! But you did spell losing incorrectly'loosing'?

Other than that, it is very well-written. So keep up the good work. Someone needs to show the shit-writers there are authors like you that can actually write decent fanfiction! p2bF

deathgrip...nice *colon right parenthesis* can't wait to see how this turns out

Not bad a story. I look forward to see how it develops. :D

I really like this chapter. It seriously makes me want to know more, which is very good. Your grammar and spelling are fine, I found your characterization (that does not look like it's spelled right...) to be lovely, and you had a good amount of details. My only recommendation would be to write longer chapters. Your author's notes are drowning out your writing, dear.

Keep writing. :3

Regards,

Whisper