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| Reviews for Transatlanticism |
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  Akiha-nyaa 6/4/13 . chapter 3 Please update! This is an awesome fanfic and I can't wait to see what will happen next! |
 katsekala 4/28/13 . chapter 3Hehehe! I like it! Many kisses! |
| 69unknownneko69 4/9/13 . chapter 3 Still goin good. There is "Rin propped an arm up n her bedside" which appears to be a typo. Also there is "A long, pregnant pause took over the room.", in which the adjective pregnant really does not fit. Lastly, I know you haven't worked on this for-if I'm reading the status info right-two years, but I really hope you continue this story, or at least wrap it up. Since this is an alternate universe with limited demon communication, I was wondering what would become of Shiemi's powers (Nii and all that). I like the idea of her "being the master of" Rin, but please be careful, this could go in many directions. It would be nice if they were equals, under the guise of master and familiar. I really hope you continue this! |
| 69unknownneko69 4/9/13 . chapter 2 Again, wonderful details and continuity. However, I thought it was a little forced that Shiemi didn't notice he was naked all that time. It would be better if she noticed earlier, or he was just dressed in really, really ragged clothing. Otherwise, its great! I like how you managed to weave Yukio in smoothly. |
| 69unknownneko69 4/9/13 . chapter 1 This is the only RinxShiemi fan fiction I have found that I like. The description in your writing really adds to the feel of your story. However, when she says "Kitty, wait!", I think that she should just say "Wait!". Shiemi has a sweet, mild personality, but saying "Kitty" seems a little childish. This is just a small detail, otherwise your writing was spotless. |
| Guest 2/21/13 . chapter 1 awesome |
| Hanamoto Aika 2/17/13 . chapter 3 I hope you can finish this story ASAP.. QwQ cuz i love this ff u know! QwQ |
| Invisibly Inkedd 2/13/13 . chapter 3 This is a really interesting AU! I'd love to see more of it |
| Siezai 1/25/13 . chapter 3 Plz update? It's really good! |
| Mykala Black 1/14/13 . chapter 1 It was great. Wonderful writing. Great details. Good storyline. All in all very good :D I hope you continue this fanfic |
| HellButterflyGirl 12/26/12 . chapter 3 Awesome! I love Rin x Shiemi I thought the previous chapter had a really good, realistic action scene. Also, I think romance/adventure might be more fitting than romance/drama...? Please update very soon! :D |
| vgjvgvtyvy 12/7/12 . chapter 3 this is a good one. I really like it, you should continue it |
| Love Psycho 10/6/12 . chapter 3 Oh...this is GOOD. Shiemi is Rin's Tamer...by accident. Cool. And I can't wait for Kuro to be introduced properly. I'm curious about the circumstances that lead to Rin being trapped - and it seems like Yukio might be older in this case as well... -hands over platter- Magic cookies for you! |
| Redwriter17 9/22/12 . chapter 3 I like this story so far! Rin is so adorable (as always). Keep writing! Plz XD |
| aeray 9/16/12 . chapter 3 This is adorable. Please update! |
