Hi ! i LOVE Notes for a spinning planet - Melody Carlson ! i've been looking for a fanfiction of it but i could never find anything! I just stumbled across this and its soooooo good, pleasae write more, i noticed that you havent updated since 7-11-11 but i hope you update because i like you style of writing and think its really cool.

hope i havent rambled to much...

please update!

I think this a tad fast paced and even though it is from A SPINNING PLANET, try and space out your sentences into mini-paragraphs. I think it would help just a little for other readers' understanding of the story.

Besides that, your main character is very... Excited. Make sure there are some dialogue and scenery in this story if you ever decide to continue or update it.

Cheers and hope I wasn't too harsh for you. :(

Arrra

Btw i ment the end of the series sucked not the end of your story hehe! u get it! haha :)

LOVE IT! Might not be maddies type of wrting but it good to continue the series cuz the ending SUCKED! LOL! please write more!