I'll admit I wasn't looking for a story when I came here. If you can figure out why, good for you.

This was very well written. I like the way that you don't reveal who anyone is except for Sonic. I especially like the line "In fact, it's gotten to the point where I usually imagine him as you."
A story I wish I could have written.
Good job.
Not very constructive but it was really so well done I don't have any criticism really. You could have maybe used the words 'the caller', 'the person' etc a bit less, but that might have totally changed some of the sentences for the worse. So that's just a sort of observation I suppose.

Please continue. Ohhhh who is the old flame ?is it amy is it is it please telll me!

The guy in the background on the other end of the line. The one hurling insults and complaints. That had to have been the reference to Lord Kelvin.

Amazing, as always, a new type of story, it's like ablibs in your imagination! Honestly, this is pretty good. Always amazing job.

I really like your story. You left it open for possibilities and made it so that fans of all different couples could ejoy it equally with their own oppinions. You have a very good writing style and use great details so we, the readers, can get the full idea of what you're trying to say.

Quite the gem. Ah, good job.

My God. O.O

Wow, just wow.

My mind is reeling with questions of who these people could be.

What I wanna know is who he was talking to!