It was beautiful and sad. I enjoyed and loved this.

I loved this story it was just awesome!

Wow! This was so good! Really simple yet you captured a perfect moment, you know?

Remember Me's my favorite movie because it had such a huge impact on me. Ally's thing with the dessert coming into play for Tyler was really foreshadowing moment. They should've put something like that in the movie :)

Anyway lol great job! loved it

HOORAAY! i think im the first to reveiw! it was really good! i loved how you showed his emotions while he was waiting. in the next chapter can you explain how micheal died a bit better? i am a bit curious... And Tyler's dad works in the twin towers? if so you did a SUPERB job of foreshodowing. i'm really anxious to see what happens next. i'm also cunfuzzled about the quote at the end but YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB! I love it! i really want to watch the movie now! oh and why is he meeting with the lawyer? did he like kill someone? now i know a lot of my questions will be answered in the next chapter but i want to ask them anyway so you will remember to write about them :D I LOVE THIS STORY ALEX! 3 Susie