This is the average god of the bible. Nothing more than a destroyer, a savage, a being of pure evil, no wonder the devil rebelled. Gods cruelty is why i am an atheist

Man this was good, thanks for expanding on this. The grammar needed to be touched up a bit but this was really good. :)

Nice, I love different versions of the Fall of Lucifer. Thank you so much for this if you could be so kind as to expand on this I would give you a virtual cookie and a hug. :D

The bible made it pretty clear that Satan was arrogant, and thought he was better than god, which is why he rebelled with the support of some other angels. Other than that, I though the dialogue was a bit bland and lifeless. I like the idea though.

LIEZ

but other than that it was a good story

I gotta say, its an interesting point of view on the fall of Lucifer. Though your grammar could use a little fixing...