read the whole story loved the whole story, pease please please do more soon. and good job.

Karakot

This is a nice addition I do hope you show the crews reaction to meeting riddick though

Ty

nice update but i hope there will be more soon.

great story plz update soon i can't wait to see the crews reaction to this new development

simom is such a boob. lol.

A pregnant River's kinda scary and at the same time, boring. She can't fight anymore without risking the baby. Not to mention, I've never pictured Riddick as the father type. I just can't see him carrying a baby around and changing diapers.

ohh what a maddening place to leave it! LOL I cant wait to read more...the crews reactions to Rivers lovers are always my favorite parts.

simon is a boob. riddick is just hot.

That was great...I don't really know what will happen but I can't wait to find out, so please update soon.

Solaira out title for riddick cracked me up it is to perfect. The god of death and hotness

Thanks for the update. this is so fun. can't wait to see how everyone copes with the new addition to the family. At lease Simon didn't passout.

Soooo you never left us...yayyyy...What is going to happen next..hummm...possibly Simon fainting...that would be funny...oh... and lots of yelling from Mal.. defiantly Mal...oh...and guns being pulled...lots of guns...Riddick gently pushing River to his back and then pulling a shiv out of no where...how many shivs does the god of death and hottness have anyway?...lol...anyhow..then River trying to calm a situation that could and would turn veryyyy bloody real fast...and then she will kick some ass...well...cuz she can...this first encounter between the crew and Riddick should be very interesting and I can't wait to read your take on it...thanks for the quick update

great

you call this a complete story? :( nothing really happened, wished you would have continued :(