I saw a lot of mistakes in this story and out of character cannon characters. First off, the sun wouldn't house anything the heat from the sun would melt metal, even Starscream taking her remains his metal would melt.

Secondly, the attitude of the Autobots is not right, even if they did not like her, they would not let a fellow autobot get killed. Elita no matter how angry she got would not watch a fellow femme get killed, she would have handled a jealous femme a little differently.

You might consider this a flame, but in all honestly this story could have been worked a little better, it didn't really seem like you put much thought to this story.

Try to slow it down and make your stories sound a little more thought out next time