 Remix 16 6/9/11 . chapter 1Beautiful! Some of the lines you used here ("Yuna knows it's not him, but the likeness is too strong..." and "It rings clear, cutting through the snow, before falling silent once more." are just a few) are wonderful. I got chills, lol! And your use of drama ("The memories rushed back to her, a flurry in her head. She remembers. The spring. The kiss. The promise.") was awesome! Keep up the good work. I'd love to see a happy Tidus/Yuna reuniting scene written by you :)
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