Wow. No sarcasm. This story is BRILLIANT! Here I am, skimming through the fanfics of B.T.T., and THIS story just... it takes my breath away, you know? Your plot's amazing. You have the characters' personas just perfectly blending with each other.

If this were a real book I'd give it a starred review.

Wait, isn't that what this is?

please continue writing and update soon! :)

So great to see you writing again! This was a very nice chapter. Looking forward to more.

You've got another loyal reader right here! If you are still open to suggestions, somewhere down the road it would be really interesting to see Jess somehow discover what Les was (and is) going thru because of her "absence." if ya wanna tell me something, I don't have an ff account, but you can reach me at

*gets impatient as he waits for Mei-Roun to update*

No I mean it! You are an amazing writer. Why take an art major when you're awesome at writing instead?

oh please continue the story! i know its been quite a while since u last updated but i would appreciate it, i really like this story

Oh my glob this was awesome writing! I really like the characterization; they still seem like them even though they aren't...and I'm not making sense. But yeah, twas awesome.

Your writing style is absolutely eye catching. I've been reading a lot of fanfics lately, and its rare to find ffs that sound so good. A few notes though, you still made some mistakes on word usage, as well as some mispellings, but overall it's great. Hope you update soon, and goodluck with college. :)

Nice new take on how Leslie and Jess get to know each other. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Yay new update!

Your characterization is flawless - especially given the different events.

You have a very unique way of writing that I've always enjoyed I can't wait to see their friendship reblossom in later chapters (x

You have a knack for drawing a reader.

please. update. this. story.

There are very few well-written stories in the Terabithia archive. This is one of them. The characters are strangely spot on (at least, their characterisation makes sense - they're still *them* despite the fact the book never happened in this AU) and - wow.

Please, please, please PLEASE. UPDATE :D

Very nice chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

I am bookmarking this story until you finish this:) I like it, keep it up and UPDATE:D

Interesting chapter. I like where you're going with this alternate universe.

LOL, when I saw the chapter's name being "Error", I thought it would be just a statement from you or something.

Anyway, I think it was nice to see Jess' POV too. Looking forward to the next chapter.