The ending was delivered perfectly. Great job on this, I thought it was excellent.
And thank you for more Franks stories. There aren't enough, in my opinion.

Wow...this is excellent work. I love the parallelism, Shannon & Kelly's last greetings to and time with Jackson matching the team's last greetings to and time with Mike...really nice.

Oh, my - Gibbs' gut at work. Good job!

Was bored in work(yeah, the weekend), and just looked up 'Mike Franks' in the NCIS archive. Ran across your story. I really liked it. Great Job! Have a good weekend.

Very nice! I hope that we see Gibbs mourn for Mike a bit more in season 9...this friendship was too special not to spend a bit more time on the "end" of it.

I think this was a great tidbit out of that episode!

This is good.

I forgot about him asking what did it remind him of lol :) good one shot.

Great snapshot and tribute to Mike-

So sad, but just beautiful. I love echoes in writing, and you did a great job with this one.

Oh that was sad

Dark . . .

You're right, the team's greetings were sweet. I like this parallel, which emphasizes the family dynamic.

Wow, this was amazing :)

It warmed me right up, you know? Just lovely :D

It also gave me chills, well, the last line gave me chills, An excellent fic :)

Well done :)

I'm so glad people are making Mike fics :)

Molz x