Very very cool. I haven't read much in the 2nd person, and this was fascinating. Very cool indeed.

Wow...that is an interesting metaphorical dilemma. Thanks for writing something actually thought provoking.

This was very enjoyable for me with second person pov as an added bonus.

While I can't exactly say that this is how it was implied in SH-5(I recall that it was more a person taking Christ's height and such. It has been quite a few years since I last read it so I may be off on this), it has a Vonnegut touch to it.

It might even have been how Vonnegut would have set it up if it was more like your idea; setting up a set of circumstances that crush a man beliefs.

Stories in second person are very annoying. This is no exception.

Ooohh, creative.

I liked it.

this was very odd. what else can i say?

Interesting not religious or anything but may I ask what your intention was for the story? Also why is it just one paragraph its a little disorienting this way.