|Reviews for Jesus and the Time Machine|
| C. E. Kilgore Trout 6/10/13 . chapter 1
Very very cool. I haven't read much in the 2nd person, and this was fascinating. Very cool indeed.
| DragonGolem 3/17/12 . chapter 1
Wow...that is an interesting metaphorical dilemma. Thanks for writing something actually thought provoking.
| LBric 3/1/12 . chapter 1
This was very enjoyable for me with second person pov as an added bonus.
While I can't exactly say that this is how it was implied in SH-5(I recall that it was more a person taking Christ's height and such. It has been quite a few years since I last read it so I may be off on this), it has a Vonnegut touch to it.
It might even have been how Vonnegut would have set it up if it was more like your idea; setting up a set of circumstances that crush a man beliefs.
| Anon 9/24/11 . chapter 1
Stories in second person are very annoying. This is no exception.
| Est. 98 8/16/11 . chapter 1
I liked it.
| qwerqwer 6/10/11 . chapter 1
this was very odd. what else can i say?
| BANE19 6/10/11 . chapter 1
Interesting not religious or anything but may I ask what your intention was for the story? Also why is it just one paragraph its a little disorienting this way.