Aahh i like this pairing!
Carmen x Gary :*

nice story! X3

You should try to pace yourself, this is moving way too fast! Where's the detail? Anyways, love the plot!

Please update!this has the beginning of a great story! Longer chapters would be great! Love this story!

It's good kid, but i'd like to see a bit more description. Like details on the kisses, or maybe you could have gary just staring at Carmen, just vasking in her beauty and you could go over what makes carmen special to him. Just the little things, If you need some help- I'm an Idea beta. with a bit of help and practice, you might just go somewhere kid.

FRG

hehehe cute! i legit giggled!

Really really great. Altough ideas should come up on your own I understand as a fellow writer the complecation of it. Maybe you can have them go to the mountains to track an evil villian and than they get lead all over the place. Idk. However it is really difficult sometimes but you have to keep going and I really hope you update soon!

i luv the fanfic, cant wiat 4 update

Irrelevant of how short that was, I enjoyed it thoroughly and it seems pretty finished to me! Great job! :)

Yes! I'm so glad Gary and Carmen are together. They make the cutest couple. Please update soon because I totally can't wait to read more.

You must continue, that was a really good story.

You could send them somewhere like the amazon and then ,that Jackass could appear and be either the villiain or the villain's me if this you're looking for.

love it and so cant wait for more

love it!

That was soooooooooooo unbelievably cute n adorable n FLUFFY n it made me extremely happy! :D

hmmm, ideas... not very good at that. but i can give you random words and u can think on that if u like.

egypt

pyramids

snow

secret headquarters for villan in pyramids

the last one was a real idea. the egypt inspired theme is because i have recently watched the mummy 2. although snow is kinda out there...

:D