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| Reviews for Devil's First Zero |
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   buhbibutterfly 10/22/12 . chapter 4ello. just wanted to drop by after finishing this story to tell you i really enjoyed it. especially that last scene starting with just hirma and mamori in the football field. I really hope you write a sequel. would love to read when mamori finally wears the necklace cuz you just know they're meant to meet again and get together - |
| Hermi-ko 9/9/12 . chapter 4 Oh my Lord! So much love and epicness in this chapter! Even though I am still struggling with the idea that brusquely she was scouted, I feel that someone's feelings are coming across slowly but fiercely' Thank you for this awesoness! Do you mind if I translate this story into French? I really want to give a chance to the fans out there to know about the Devil's ...kindness? Congratulations again for your hard work! *Hermi-kô*** |
| Hermi-ko 9/9/12 . chapter 3 I love it! So sweet, nice and all, not OOC (or too few), i like your writing style What is going to happen in the next chapter? I am dying to know! *Hermi-kô*** |
| Hermi-ko 9/9/12 . chapter 2 Oh my gosh, i was like :"Come on, they are being all mushy, it's nice and all but what else?" And then the fall of this chapter made me laughing out loud! Seriously? I am SO awaiting saturday as well *Hermi-kô*** |
| Hermi-ko 9/9/12 . chapter 1 Hey! I was strolling down the lastest HiruMamo when I saw you talking about this fanfic. So here I am, enjoying myself at the thought of what would await the sweet Mamori at the library You got me hooked up, you have to pay the price now! Good, chapters to read! I really like HiruMamo so thank you! *Hermi-kô*** |
| DarkDashy 5/19/12 . chapter 1 love it :D ! |
| PrettyChelsea 5/19/12 . chapter 4 Loved the ending! Please make a sequel. I'm quite as to what specifically was the deal that Hiruma made. |
| sakurenjiDREamer 5/19/12 . chapter 4 oh, definitely a sequel! pretty please? :3 |
| sakurenjiDREamer 3/28/12 . chapter 3 I didn't know that this was updated. :D I just noticed in the first chapter, it was 3:15 and then it became 3:10? Wasn't it supposed to be 3:20? :) Anyways, what's next ? :) |
| Bar-Ohki 6/15/11 . chapter 2 What a fun update! Love how you didn't reveal it wasn't a dream until the end. You need to check in with your verb tenses and plurals, they don't always agree. |
| quarterdark 6/14/11 . chapter 2 haha aw poor mamori :( it was very nicely written a bit of a surprise but now i really want to know what hiruma really wants for this library hmm :) hope you keep writing |
| jidamv 6/13/11 . chapter 2 what it will be happen at library ? I want to know ! Anyway it's amazing that hiruma has a zero on math test. He is known to be a awesome tactician and stratagier . Maybe he did it deliberaly for catch mamori's attention , no ? |
| Mitama31773 6/12/11 . chapter 2 What? A dream? OwO . Make it real XD |
| quarterdark 6/11/11 . chapter 1 brilliaant start hope you keep on writing this |
| Bar-Ohki 6/10/11 . chapter 1 He slept through the exam didn't he? |
