Well I liked that, it was sweet :) and you made a great Roger, I loved him :D

i loved it awsome you can see michael any way you wish it all fiction no matter who agree or not i like this keep on ir

It's not bad, but it does need some work. I see grammatical errors and the story isn't running smoothly. The set up also needs work. Maybe a beta would be good.

Sorry dude I just thought since this one kid wrote about it I d just give it a shot so thats why plus im new to this kinda thing read dangerous and youll like mines better plus you dont even know michael jackson like that you didnt know what he did so lay off. Id like to see stories and see if your any the only asshole to comment on here

I cant believe you portrayed michael as some gay guy, he is not gay. Also you should quit writing, or brush up on it I mean cause this is pathetic. Story moves too fast and there's no emotion. Honestly, try agaiin