this story is epic :D

Nice description! :D I liked how you explained Skies surroundings in the story. The last part (where his brother is introduced) is a little bit rushed though. A little more would've made it nice (details? epilogue?). I think I'd be a great story if you continued this. :D I'm still planning on making a fanfic of DFO - but procrastination has gotten in the way. Hopefully this summer I'll be able to type up a few paragraphs to get it going. Well, hoped this helped - good luck!

P.S. Still not in Ghent yet, but I'm getting there!

- Words from a Metalheart (53)