|Reviews for Training the Avenger|
| Guest 5/14/13 . chapter 1
This seems interesting, but before I continue reading... I found a tiny mistake: "The powerful Uchiha was taken out by one signal person." - I think you meant single instead of signal.
Now I'll go read the next chapter.
| Ciel Moony 5/13/13 . chapter 18
| mfmxxx 5/12/13 . chapter 18
Id say just have Naruto assassinate Danzo, problem solved...
| Decius23 5/11/13 . chapter 18
Yay, a little improvement (finally) in the relationship between shizuka and naruto!
And as i've written in the review to 'family of foxes and snakes': Your chapters are really, really short for the pace the story has! I mean this story has approx. 2.4k words per chapter and this one contains only one dialog shizuka-kyuubi, one dialog naruto-hana and one little part naruto-shizuka. For one month waiting this (and the other story) update is simply to little. There is much characterdevelopment but the story itself doesn't really move forward (while 'foxes and snakes' we have the oppisite, rather fast story pace but a bit too less char development)!
I know that you write stories as your hobby and that the real life is of course the most important but i think you could do a bit more than this.
| a.marsh55 5/11/13 . chapter 18
Good chapter update soon.
| RHatch89 5/11/13 . chapter 18
| xdevil-childx 5/11/13 . chapter 18
cool cant wait to see what happens next
| imsabbel 5/11/13 . chapter 18
Okay, that chapter did little, actually.
Hana gives the tip of letting Shizuka making her own mistakes? Well, Kushina nd Naruto have been doing that for YEARS. Instead of seeing the warning signs and doing, well, _parenting_, they even let 10 year old Shizuka start to basically ruin her life.
You have Naruto state that he loves her blabla, but in the whole fic, nobody has ever, in any way, shown her affection or attention aside from Danzou. Most of her "being a bitch" isn't any different than Naruto being a shithead prankster.
| Mel72000 5/11/13 . chapter 18
Thank you very much for this chapter, I love the reconciliation between Naruto and Shizuka !
| Tostie 5/11/13 . chapter 18
Nice chapter - weird i didnt get a update nottice
| war sage 5/11/13 . chapter 18
| Ciel Moony 5/5/13 . chapter 17
| Anon4 3/22/13 . chapter 17
I don't know what to think of Naruto or Shizuka for now and it seems Naruto has even thought about to kill his OWN SISTER all for the Village, So Naruto only sees her as stranger...a very sad relation they have now and even Kushina seems to have given up hope and seems half-hearted.
All in all Naruto and Kushina has seemed to give up on Shizuka and that is going to make her only worse and not help her.
Sadly no Sasuke x Naruto interactions here.
| Furionknight 3/22/13 . chapter 17
I look forward to more of this story :)
| FlyingLinguineMonster 3/22/13 . chapter 17
This is my first read of this story. Not one of my favorites of yours, if only because you focus a lot of time on Shizuka and she is portrayed as an ungrateful, impetuous, brat with no respect for her family. Seriously, I hate reading the Shizuka parts because she is such a bratling. I do like the Naruto character and his interactions with Hana. I also want to know more about their third teammate and would like to see some flashbacks to show how close and what Naruto and Rin shared together.
I'm guessing that Sasuke will eventually have to help bring down Shizuka. This won't ever be one of my fav. stories, but you're still one of my fav. authors so i'll keep up with where this story goes for that reason.