|Reviews for I wanna be number 1,Its not meant to be like this|
| FifiLovesDarrenCriss 6/14/11 . chapter 1
The story line is so good, I love the story so much anf jazz or jazzy seems to be an interesting person...can't wait for the next chapter, really wanna get to know jazzy more
| anonymousness 6/14/11 . chapter 1
ok, so i read it. the storyline is ok. and the characters seem kind of cool, but the grammar and the spelling, its all a bit to slangish. i liked the story, dont get me wrong. i just think you need to work on it a bit and not just put in little random bits. like the pregnant bit needed to be alot more in focus. you just said it like she was dropping off some groceries or something.
| CouldYouWriteTheUnwritten 6/12/11 . chapter 1