I have to agree. The story has grasped me since the first sentence and held me in it's grip. I want more. Please continue this story, the idea is too great to be tossed away.

I definitely think that this is worth continuing. It grabbed my attention from the first sentence. Your flow is excellent, and your grammar is flawless. Also, the concept is intriguing. Now, I know that's not really much coming from a new member, but if you continue this, I'll read it for sure. Keep up the good work!

Oh finally, finally! After more than two years, some one is actually writting Stealth fic, I thought I am the only one on Earth :D Please continue in this, I had these thoughts too, but I never did it, please make more, I want to see your ideas here :)