|Reviews for What if?|
| UCAV-EDI 6/13/12 . chapter 1
I have to agree. The story has grasped me since the first sentence and held me in it's grip. I want more. Please continue this story, the idea is too great to be tossed away.
| Indi13 6/7/12 . chapter 1
I definitely think that this is worth continuing. It grabbed my attention from the first sentence. Your flow is excellent, and your grammar is flawless. Also, the concept is intriguing. Now, I know that's not really much coming from a new member, but if you continue this, I'll read it for sure. Keep up the good work!
| StealthKaelly 7/26/11 . chapter 1
Oh finally, finally! After more than two years, some one is actually writting Stealth fic, I thought I am the only one on Earth :D Please continue in this, I had these thoughts too, but I never did it, please make more, I want to see your ideas here :)